My design hadn't changed since the last crit however I did have some questions to ask, these were:Should I add text and what?
Are the two stripes (II roman numerals) of the old photo enough?
The feed back I got was:
To try using a V instead of the two stripes to reference the fact it was the victory parade. Even if not the whole letter V, try slanting off the ends of the stripes so the look more V shaped.
As for text, if you want to add some maybe look at newspaper articles about the victory parade and add a small strip of text from that at the bottom? Or find the original article that the image was taken from and use that? However no one found text to be essential
Overall I was happy with the feedback I received especially that no one saw any major issues and everyone thought it was a resolved piece. In terms of colour, I am going to continue to experiment with these during the screen print process.
When experimenting with text it became obvious to me that the design didnt need it. I think the text takes away from the image therefore I will not be using it.
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