For the final crit I presented these 6 banners/posters. I am pleased with what I have been able to produce in just a day and a half. The feedback I received was very positive, I explained before showing my work that it was aimed at 3-11 year olds therefore looked very simplistic so people weren't shocked. Everyone thought it fit the brief well and was exactly what they'd imagine children of that age to think about and associate with these specific words. People did think the typography needed to be altered a little bit as the P and U in pupil voice are too close together. They also suggested that I put 'safe and healthy' and 'respect and care' on two separate lines to make it easy to read and less intimidating. I will take this on board as I agree that the type isn't as good as it could be, I spent most of my time creating illustrations as I found these the most important.
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