Studio Brief 02 - Crit

Here is my work displayed for the crit. I haven't done any digital work yet as I want to experiment as much as possible by hand and I know that as soon as I start creating digital work I will stop doing this.
The feedback I got was to experiment more with the handwriting idea and work bigger, rather than having 5 ideas per page having 1 idea per page and expanding on it.
To research movement and how to illustrate this through a typeface.
To look at handwritten letterforms and re watch gentlemen of letter.
Try using italics.