Crit

(image a)

(image b)

For the crit I showed a selection of the pages I had designed, including the ones above. I wanted to know whether or not image a would work well against image b or if everything needed to be collaged throughout. The feedback I got was:

>The image a works well as it is zoomed in and still leaves things to the imagination. This sparks interest from the reader by only revealing a little bit.
>Breaking a rule by creating another rule is acceptable as it doesn't give you enough freedom to make the design look bad. It restrains you enough to make a good design.
> Could the text showing the location of the place create a journey running through the book?