After the crit I took on the feedback and decided to make a journey throughout the book along the tyre track line. Orlando had suggested that I create this using the place names, however they all differ in size and I didn't think this would be possible. I decided to do this with a simple red dot instead of the writing. However I didn't like this and don't think it fits with the design.
I then decided to try and make the design more subtle by integrating this 'journey' into the tyre track pattern. I layered red dashes over the existing line, however again I didn't like this. I didnt want this to have too much influence on the reader and direct them on a certain route. I want them to make their won journey and visit the places as and when they want to.
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